"The Secret Love Lives of Teenage Boys"
Author's Central Claim
"Not only do adolescent boys have hearts, but they're also the biggest romantics around." (205)
My Central Claim
"Peggy Giordano was determined to prove that teenage boys have a much larger romantic side to their sex life than previously understood by the public." (1)
My Revised Claim
Through her social science studies, Peggy Giordano is determined to disprove the public assumption that teenage boys can't love, in a romantic and truely loving way.